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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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00Another simple composition for Primary 1 students. Could someone please edit this short composition for me. Thank you very much. Happy New Year.02br
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00 00My name is Wen Xu. I am seven years old. I am a tall and thin boy. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my brother and me.00 02br
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00 00I go to Westlake Primary School. I am in Primary 2. My favourite subject is English. I always do well in the English examinations.00 02br
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00 00I want to be a doctor when I grow up. That is why I am studying very hard.02br
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0 00 My name is Wen Xu, I am seven years old. I am a 01font 00lanky 02font 00boy. 00 02br 00 I go to Westlake Primary School.

— Inchoateknowledge

  • 0 00 My name is Wen Xu, I am seven years old.
  • I am a 01font 00lanky 02font 00boy.
  • 00 02br 00 I go to Westlake Primary School.
  • I am in Primary 2.
  • My favourite subject is English.
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0 00 My name is Wen Xu, I am seven years old. I am a 01font00lanky 02font00boy. We are four in my family: my parents, my brother and I.00 02br
00 I go to Westlake Primary School. I am in Primary 2. My favourite subject is English. I always do well in the English examinations.00 02br
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0 Maybe I would write this : "00There are four people in my family : my parents, my brother and me."02br
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00It's just to avoid a lot of short sentences and a kind of interrupted speech.02br
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00Edit : too slow... And I forgot "and I"... Thanks ^_^0-
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0Hi Incho02br
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00Many thanks for editing my composition. 02br
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00Happy New Year.0-
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10Many thanks for editing my composition. 12br
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10Happy New Year.12br
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10Hello Yong02br
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00Do not accelerate the inexorable advance of time, please 05002br
00New year is 5
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0Hello Incho02br
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00I wish you Happy New Year now in case I've no chance to wish you on the eve of the new year. 0-
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0 Although we have different opinions at times, we still are cyber friends. From Goodman a New Year wish to all. Have a very smooth sailing and properous year in 2007.02br
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00Just a comment from me. As Liat had indicated, this is the work of a primary 1 student. I think he is as good as can be for his age as an ELS student. So profound and difficult words should not be ev
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0Hi Goodman02br
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00Thanks for your constructive comments.02br
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00Happy New Year to you and all the other members.0-
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0Hi there,02br
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00Is it correct to write, 'We are four in my family' to mean 'There are four members in my family'?02br
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00How about 'I have four family members'?02br
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00Simon0-
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0Simon wrote: 'I have four family members.' This could mean that you are excluded. In other words, there are five people, including you, in your family. That implies that there are five family members altogether.0-
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My name is Wen Xu, seven years old and lanky boy. We are four in my family: my parents, my brother and I.
I go to Westlake Primary School as a Primary 2. My favourite subject is English and I always do well in every English examinations cause I want to be a doctor someday. That's why I am studying very hard.
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