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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
short composition
1 b 00 Hi guys, 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Could someone please edit this short composition for me. Thank you very much. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Last Sunday afternoon, my brother, Brandon, and I went to the beach with my parents. My father drove us there. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 When we reached the beach, my brother and I changed into our swimming trunks. Then we rushed to the sea, and swam. We threw a ball to each other. When we were tired, we went back to the shore. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 About five minutes later, we had lunch with our parents. We ate the food cooked by my mother. I enjoyed the food cooked by her. After that, my brother and I read the books, which we had brought. About half an hour later, my father told us it was time to go home. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 Soon we were on our way home. 00 00 A short while later, my brother and I soon fell asleep in the car. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 When we reached home, my mother woke us up. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 00 It was indeed an enjoyable day! 02 b 0-
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01 b 00 Could someone please edit this short composition for me. Thank you very much. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Last Sunday afternoon, my brother, Brandon, and I went to the beach with my parents. My father drove us there. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 When we reached the beach, my brother and I changed into our swimming trunks. Then we rushed to the sea, and swam. We threw a ball to each other. When we were tired, we went back to the shore. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 About five minutes later, we had lunch with our parents. We ate the food cooked by my mother. I enjoyed the food cooked by her. After that, my brother and I read the books, which we had brought. About half an hour later, my father told us it was time to go home. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 Soon we were on our way home. 00 00 A short while later, my brother and I soon fell asleep in the car. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 When we reached home, my mother woke us up. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 00 It was indeed an enjoyable day! 02 b 0-
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1 b 00 02 b 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 Last Sunday afternoon, my brother 01 font 00 , 02 font 00 00 Brandon, and I went to the beach with my parents. 02 b 00 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 00 When we reached the beach, my brother and I changed into our swimming trunks. Then we rushed to the sea 01 font 00 , 02 font 00 and swam.
- 1 b 00 02 b 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 Last Sunday afternoon, my brother 01 font 00 , 02 font 00 00 Brandon, and I went to the beach with my parents.
- 02 b 00 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 00 When we reached the beach, my brother and I changed into our swimming trunks.
- Then we rushed to the sea 01 font 00 , 02 font 00 and swam.
- 00 We threw a ball 01 font 00 to 02 font 00 each other (rephrase) 00 .
- When we were tired, we 01 u 00 swam 02 u 00 back to the shore.
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1 b 00 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Last Sunday afternoon, my brother 01 font 00 , 02 font 00 00 Brandon, and I went to the beach with my parents. My father drove us there. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 When we reached the beach, my brother and I changed into our swimming trunks. Then we
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01 b 00 Last Sunday afternoon, my brother 01 font 00 , 02 font 00 00 Brandon, and I went to the beach with my parents. My father drove us there. 02 b 00 02 br
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01 b 00 00 When we reached the beach, my brother and I changed into our swimming trunks. Then we
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