Short Bio for a band

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0I've been writing a short bio for a band.  I was hoping to get some opinions on it's effectiveness and some pointers on grammar.  Any thoughts on how it could be better would be greatly appreciated.    I want to convey that the lyrics apply to everyone experiencing life, and that the melodies are catchy and "sing-a-longable". thx!02br02br00---------------------------02br02br00Formed in 00 in 2007, Crusas creates alternative-indie rock that is welcoming to listeners.  The lyrics express the trials and joys of life and common experiences that communicate to both struggling and thriving. And the melodies reveal compelling themes that connect the audience with the music—fulfilling the most important goal of the band.  Music is for people experiencing life.02br02br00The sound has been compared to a mix of Evanescence, Elliott Smith, and No Doubt02br02br02br02br00-------------0-

Doll · Accepted Answer

0Formed in Portland in 2007, Crusas creates alternative-indie rock that is welcoming to listeners. The lyrics express the trials and joys of life and common experiences that 01del~~00communicate to02del~~00 01font00deals wi02font01font00th(I know this will change the meaning but communication didn't seem right to me)02font00 both struggling and thriving 01font00a02font00nd the melodies reveal compelling themes that connect the audience with the music01font00, 02font00fulfilling the most important goal of the band. Music is for people 01del~~00experiencing02del~~00 01font00to experience02font00 life.02br
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Anonymous · Answer

0wow, thanks.... that helps a lot. Do dashes make it wierd? Are those sentences grammatically correct?02br
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00As the lyrics express the trials and joys of life—common experiences that communicate to both struggling and thriving—the melodies reveal compelling and catchy themes. Together, they welcome individuals to the music, fulfilling the most important goal of the band: providing songs for people experiencing life.0-

Doll · Answer

0As the lyrics express the trials and joys of life01font00-02font00common experiences that communicate to both struggling and thriving01font00,02font00 the melodies reveal compelling and catchy themes. Together, they welcome individuals to the music, fulfilling the most important goal of the band: providing songs for people experiencing life.01font00 (I am not sure of : )02font0-

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