Shools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well as home

There is a writing task 2 of IELTS. Please check and give me more valuable advice and academic vocabularies to help me increase my score. Please predict for me a band score. Thanks so much!

There is a growing tendency nowadays for people to use the Internet for studying. Proponents of studying at home agree that teachers are not important in school these days. From my perspective, I put more weight on the role of teachers because of studying face to face brings us a huge of benefits.

My first consideration is that studying at home is really waste time. What I mean by this is that you easily to distract by other things around like games and interesting channels on TV. Besides, there are many courses on the Internet so you cannot choose a suitable course for yourself. Thirdly, staying at home all day makes students passive. For example, going to school is the best way to develop soft skills because school usually holds lots competition for students to attend and get the big prize, so they can keep strong health with a sound mine.

On the other hand, teachers also play an essential role in students’ life. Pupils are taught by teachers having more interaction. At a deeper level, teachers not only help students to gain a deeper understanding of the subject but also check and tell them what is wrong and help them to correct the mistake. Moreover, teachers experience ups and downs of life so they can give you valuable advice preventing you from costly errors.

All in all, schools are very necessary for children to get more valuable knowledge with enthusiastic teachers. Therefore, teachers still have a stable position in modern life with the development of technology.