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Yaseen Farraj 6998 Posted 11 years ago
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I need your advice on the following answer to one of the scholarship application example
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Please describe as detailed as possible how the preferred host institutions/scholarship places relate to your studies, academic specialization and research interests!
  

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I am completing my master studies in Electronic and Communication Engineering, my main interest is control of industrial applications thus I started working last semester in this topic and get deep in one of the hardware controller (Field Programmable Gate Array)I explored the pros and cons of this promising controller and I also concentrated on the application of Neural Network and its mapping and implementation on the FPGA, also I studied the application of Neural Network and get inspired by its ability to contribute on autonomous of machines, Cars, Robotics,…etc. I am thinking now to complete my thesis on this topic (Autonomous system based on neural networks implementation in FPGA), I think that this topic might intersect with my second choice since it has the options of Automation, learning, Computer Vision while the first choice has the topic of industrial applications is mentioned as a general topic, I would prefer the first choice if it is possible to go with this specific branch of Neural Network and FPGA, Finally the third choice has been selected since I am also interested in Control, Instrumentations and sensors as these topics are part of my compulsory courses and I have interests in these fields also. ]

  • I am completing my master studies in Electronic and Communication Engineering, my main interest is control of industrial applications thus I started working last semester in this topic and get deep in one of the hardware controller (Field Programmable Gate Array)I explored the pros and cons of this promising controller and I also concentrated on the application of Neural Network and its mapping and implementation on the FPGA, also I studied the application of Neural Network and get inspired by its ability to contribute on autonomous of machines, Cars, Robotics,…etc.
  • I am thinking now to complete my thesis on this topic (Autonomous system based on neural networks implementation in FPGA), I think that this topic might intersect with my second choice since it has the options of Automation, learning, Computer Vision while the first choice has the topic of industrial applications is mentioned as a general topic, I would prefer the first choice if it is possible to go with this specific branch of Neural Network and FPGA, Finally the third choice has been selected since I am also interested in Control, Instrumentations and sensors as these topics are part of my compulsory courses and I have interests in these fields also.
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I am completing my master studies in Electronic and Communication Engineering, my main interest is control of industrial applications thus I started working last semester in this topic and get deep in one of the hardware controller (Field Programmable Gate Array)I explored the pros and cons of this promising controller and I also concentrated on the application of Neural Network and its mapping a

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