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Vincent Teo Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

shocked and fear

Can I say,

(a) He noticed a middle-aged man was kept eyeing at a woman's handbag. Suddenly, the man was snatching the woman's handbag. The woman was shocked and fear.
  

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No, Vincent-- not very carefully-written sentences: (a) He noticed that a middle-aged man kept eyeing a woman's handbag. Suddenly, the man snatched it . The woman was shocked and afraid .

  • No, Vincent-- not very carefully-written sentences: (a) He noticed that a middle-aged man kept eyeing a woman's handbag.
  • Suddenly, the man snatched it .
  • The woman was shocked and afraid .
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No, Vincent-- not very carefully-written sentences:

(a) He noticed that a middle-aged man kept eyeing a woman's handbag. Suddenly, the man snatched it. The woman was shocked and afraid.
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If I say,

(a) He noticed a middle-aged man kept eyeing a woman's handbag.

Suddenly, the man snatched it. The woman was shocked and fearful.

Is there ok?
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'Fearful' tends to mean about a future event, Vincent.

The first sentence must read

He noticed a middle-aged man who kept eyeing a woman's handbag
or
He noticed that a middle-aged man kept eyeing a woman's handbag
or He noticed a middle-aged man eyeing a woman's handbag.

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