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Mr. Tom Posted 15 years ago
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She was in the kitchen when she heard some screams...
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Could you please tell me if these lines read naturally, especially the underlined parts. Any suggestion is welcome.
She was in the kitchen when she heard some screams which curbed as instantly as they had come. Realizing that her three years old daughter was alone in the yard she came out calling to her. And suddenly a horror confronted her. Cathy’s half-conscious maid was stuck to the iron grill and was clearly getting electrocuted.
Thanks,
Tom
Could you please tell me if these lines read naturally, especially the underlined parts. Any suggestion is welcome.
She was in the kitchen when she heard some screams which curbed as instantly as they had come. Realizing that her three years old daughter was alone in the yard she came out calling to her. And suddenly a horror confronted her. Cathy’s half-conscious maid was stuck to the iron grill and was clearly getting electrocuted.
Thanks,
Tom
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She was in the kitchen when she heard screams that stopped as suddenly as they had start ed. Realizing that her three-year-old daughter was alone in the yard , she rushed out calling her. A horror confronted her : Cathy’s maid was half-conscious , stuck to the iron grill and was clearly getting electrocuted.
- She was in the kitchen when she heard screams that stopped as suddenly as they had start ed.
- Realizing that her three-year-old daughter was alone in the yard , she rushed out calling her.
- A horror confronted her : Cathy’s maid was half-conscious , stuck to the iron grill and was clearly getting electrocuted.
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She was in the kitchen when she heard screams that stopped as suddenly as they had started. Realizing that her three-year-old daughter was alone in the yard, she rushed out calling her. A horror confronted her: Cathy’s maid was half-conscious, stuck to the iron grill and was clearly getting electrocuted.
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