Settle Dispute - wrong or right?

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My colleague believes the following sentence is grammatically incorrect and I cannot find anything wrong with it - can you?

The purpose of the company is to evaluate, educate, and implement efficient health and productivity strategies.

Thank you!

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

Sorry, you've posted this already somewhere else. Read your answers there.

Marius Hancu · Answer

Don't post twice, pls.

Goodman · Answer

OntheballThe purpose of the company is to evaluate, educate, and implement efficient health and productivity strategies.

My colleague believes the following sentence is grammatically incorrect and I cannot find anything wrong with it - can you?

The purpose of the company is to evaluate, educate, and implement efficient health and productivity strategies.

Thank you!

Hi Ontheball,

I think you need to take the advice from the majority; especially your colleague is a British!

I find your sentence vague and unsupportive to the core meaning.

When you make reference about a company, “purpose” is not the correct word. You used the word “evaluate” but there was no follow-up as to what is being evaluated. Also, what or who was being educated?

Efficient health- Wrong ! Good health or excellent health is the proper phrase.

So to me, you put a punch of sophisticated words into a sentence trying to make a mission statement for a company. But it only sounded more like mumbo-jumbo. Sorry about bursting your bubble but I am giving you the honest opinion.[D]

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