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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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serve to lock

Which is natural please or would you phrase differently?

This term is to serve to lock the date for your ?event so that Sound Core Music & Video does not book any work that would conflict with our involvement in your event.
This term is to allow Sound Core Music & Video to lock the date for your ?event so that the aforementioned company does not book any work that would conflict with our involvement in your event.

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The word "term" is inappropriate. I do not understand what you are trying to say. Do you mean to "block" or "reserve" the dates?

  • The word "term" is inappropriate.
  • I do not understand what you are trying to say.
  • Do you mean to "block" or "reserve" the dates?
  • We will block the dates (December 6-7) on our calendar so that there will not be any maintenance work scheduled that would interfere with the event..
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The word "term" is inappropriate.
I do not understand what you are trying to say. Do you mean to "block" or "reserve" the dates?

We will block the dates (December 6-7) on our calendar so that there will not be any maintenance work scheduled that would interfere with the event..

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