Series Synopsis

Hi, are the following sentences correct?

Short Version

Edmund, a gifted criminal profiler known for his uncanny insights, is called to inspect a pair of bodies found buried in concrete, but unfortunately, his profiling abilities have disappeared.

Long version

Edmund, a brilliant and charismatic criminal profiler known for his uncanny insights, is called to inspect a pair of bodies found buried in concrete. But after a while, he finds his profiling abilities have disappeared. He takes a leave of absence from the police department and begins therapy sessions with psychiatrist Dr. Catherine.