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ArthurAWESOME Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Sentense. okay?

After many years, perhaps ages, nowadays will seem to be kind of cool times, including scenery and others of that ilk.

is it okay?
  

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No. It needs a bit of tidying up, but the main stumbling block is that I have no idea what you mean by "including scenery and others of that ilk". "scenery" in what sense?

— Mr Wordy

  • No.
  • It needs a bit of tidying up, but the main stumbling block is that I have no idea what you mean by "including scenery and others of that ilk".
  • "scenery" in what sense?
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No. It needs a bit of tidying up, but the main stumbling block is that I have no idea what you mean by "including scenery and others of that ilk".

"scenery" in what sense?
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I meant «scenery» is a part of «nowadays» and other things of our modern life. How should I correct it?
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Do you mean "scenery" in the sense of a picturesque natural environment?

Are you saying that in the future much of the world's natural environment will have disappeared, so people will look back on our times with envy?
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No, I was trying to say about a culture. Scenery here is a modern theatre. I meant though lots of people think now it is not an art, in the future it will be look like a classical times. Kind of that, I cannot explain more correct -(
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arthurAWESOME, including scenery and others of that ilk.

This part of the sentence (please note the correct spelling) is still very confusing. Scenery is not a type of theater. "Others of that ilk" is too formal to go well with "nowadays" and "kind of." You can't just say "others" without a previous plural noun it refers back to -- other
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arthurAWESOME
No, I was trying to say about a culture. Scenery here is a modern theatre. I meant though lots of people think now it is not an art, in the future it will be look like a classical times. Kind of that, I cannot explain more correct -(

There's no problem with a sentence talking about how people will look back on our culture:
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