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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Sentencess in English
Please help me with a few sentencess- I can make them shorter or change a word to sound more proffesional, I can put 2 sentencess into one using linking words:
1. The kind of rat that is brown in colour is as supple in its ability to change its shape as a piece of rubber is.
2. Since Shanna wished to converse while she was in Sweden, she decided to study in.
3. A sentence ought to have any words that are not entirely necessary, and for that matter, there should be no unnecessary sentences contained within a paragraph. This is true for the very same reason that a drawing, if is to be a good drawing, should have no lines that are not completely necessary.
4. In my opinion I think that an author when he is writing should not get into the habit of making use of too many unnecessary words that he does not really need in order to put his message across.
and finally the last one:
5. General Electric has a new automated locomotive plant, and it is located in Erie, Pennsylvania, and it is an example of what American factories will look like in the twenty first century.
1. The kind of rat that is brown in colour is as supple in its ability to change its shape as a piece of rubber is.
2. Since Shanna wished to converse while she was in Sweden, she decided to study in.
3. A sentence ought to have any words that are not entirely necessary, and for that matter, there should be no unnecessary sentences contained within a paragraph. This is true for the very same reason that a drawing, if is to be a good drawing, should have no lines that are not completely necessary.
4. In my opinion I think that an author when he is writing should not get into the habit of making use of too many unnecessary words that he does not really need in order to put his message across.
and finally the last one:
5. General Electric has a new automated locomotive plant, and it is located in Erie, Pennsylvania, and it is an example of what American factories will look like in the twenty first century.
Top answer
(1)A brown-colored rat can change its shape as easily as a piece of rubber. (2) Planning to visit Sweden, Shanna decided to study the native language. (3) Like a good drawing that has a minimal number of lines, a good paragraph should have sentences that contain only the most essential words.
- (1)A brown-colored rat can change its shape as easily as a piece of rubber.
- (2) Planning to visit Sweden, Shanna decided to study the native language.
- (3) Like a good drawing that has a minimal number of lines, a good paragraph should have sentences that contain only the most essential words.
- (4) In my opinion, an author should avoid more words than are necessary to get the message across.
- (5) General Electric's new automated locomotive plant in Erie, Pennsylvania, shows what American factories will look lilke in this century.
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(1)A brown-colored rat can change its shape as easily as a piece of rubber. (2) Planning to visit Sweden, Shanna decided to study the native language. (3) Like a good drawing that has a minimal number of lines, a good paragraph should have sentences that contain only the most essential words. (4) In my opinion, an author should avoid more words than are necessary to get the message across. (5) Ge
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