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Nicky Couture Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Sentences that need correction

Please help me correct the following sentences. (They might need a few tweaks here and there.) Emotion: big smile

Topher ruined Tammy's dress. Good thing he's a cute little puppy and can get away with it. Or at least, I hope so!

All I'm asking for is: Let me know 24 hours in advance, people!

I really would like some cotton candy, or maybe just some non-sticky cotton candy!

Also, when using etc. should it be all in caps? Like the following:

I enjoy, fishing, hunting, biking, ETC.

- Thanks in advance for helping!
  

Top answer

Your sentences sound good to me, my only adjustment would be the second one. All I'm asking for is to let me know 24 hours in advance, people! ", use small letters.

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  • Your sentences sound good to me, my only adjustment would be the second one.
  • All I'm asking for is to let me know 24 hours in advance, people!
  • ", use small letters.
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Your sentences sound good to me, my only adjustment would be the second one.

All I'm asking for is to let me know 24 hours in advance, people!

And there is no need for capitalised "etc.", use small letters.
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We could not identify with there perception because their figures was not even in the ball path.
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their perception

figures were

ball park.
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