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Ben9108 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Sentences restructure
I would like to seek anyone assistance to comment my sentences as below. Thanks
1) Don't reply on technical energy saving techniques
Rewrite:Human issue to be made attention rather than technical aspects.
2) Don't just busily practising energy conservation without going on to training
Rewrite:Training need to be concentrated and provided with carrying energy saving plan
3) Don't give up easily even under adverse conditions
Rewrite:Problems to be solved rather than dismissed
4) Don't think the energy conservation job is easy
Rewrite:Difficult work of energy conservation to be bear in mind everytime
1) Don't reply on technical energy saving techniques
Rewrite:Human issue to be made attention rather than technical aspects.
2) Don't just busily practising energy conservation without going on to training
Rewrite:Training need to be concentrated and provided with carrying energy saving plan
3) Don't give up easily even under adverse conditions
Rewrite:Problems to be solved rather than dismissed
4) Don't think the energy conservation job is easy
Rewrite:Difficult work of energy conservation to be bear in mind everytime
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Hi, I would like to seek anyone assistance to comment my sentences as below. Thanks YHere are some edits and comments. 1) Don't rely reply on technical energy saving techniques Rewrite:Human issue to be made attention rather than technical aspects.
- Hi, I would like to seek anyone assistance to comment my sentences as below.
- Thanks YHere are some edits and comments.
- 1) Don't rely reply on technical energy saving techniques Rewrite:Human issue to be made attention rather than technical aspects.
- Your sentence has no main verb.
- 2) Don't just busily practising energy conservation without going on to training Your sentence has no main verb.
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Hi,
I would like to seek anyone assistance to comment my sentences as below. Thanks
YHere are some edits and comments.
1) Don't relyreply on technical energy saving techniques
Rewrite:Human issue to be made attention rather than technical aspects. Your sentence has no main verb.
2) Don't just busily pr
I would like to seek anyone assistance to comment my sentences as below. Thanks
YHere are some edits and comments.
1) Don't rely
Rewrite:Human issue to be made attention rather than technical aspects. Your sentence has no main verb.
2) Don't just busily pr
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