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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hi All, are these sentences grammatically correct? Appreciate your help, thank you.

1. Having become Aria’s Amica, Akari is still in training until she can get her gun back from her. However, Shino feels like she is losing her friend.
2. Aria and friends undergo a body checkup in school. From the various tests, it turns out that Raika has very good vision and athletic skills.
  

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Can someone please check the above sentences, thanks.

  • Can someone please check the above sentences, thanks.
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Can someone please check the above sentences, thanks.
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Anonymous1. Having become Aria’s Amica, Akari is still in training until she can get her gun back from her. However, Shino feels like she is losing her friend.
It's OK as written. I'd write However, Shino feels that she is losing her friend.
Anonymous2. Aria and friends undergo a body checkup in school. From the various te

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