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Apprentice123 Posted 10 years ago
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Since most sexual assaults, in colleges, occur when students are under influence of alcohol, having firearms involved is unlikely to make things better. Therefore, firearms are not the solution to avoid sexual assaults; in fact, those weapons could lead to more sexual violence.
Since most sexual assaults, in colleges, occur when students are under influence of alcohol, having firearms involved is unlikely to make things better. Therefore, firearms are not the solution to avoid sexual assaults; in fact, those weapons could lead to more sexual violence.
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Reconsider your commas in your first sentence. Other than that, your sentences are fine.
- Reconsider your commas in your first sentence.
- Other than that, your sentences are fine.
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Reconsider your commas in your first sentence.
Other than that, your sentences are fine.
Other than that, your sentences are fine.
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Apprentice123under influence of alcohol,under the influence of alcohol,
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