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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Sentences correction

One of my co-worker wrote the following sentences, I told him his is wrong!!

But he didn't believe me ==

Could any correct the setences to prove that he is wrong!!

Thanks a lot

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Recently, European begin trying to get used to drink tea

instead of daily coffees, becasue most want to realise

more chinese cultures than before, for doing business or for health.

2.

We focus on selling tea products, generated mainly in Taiwan

but seldom in china to Europe, providing different

types and qualities of the tea such as green , black or herbs.
  

Top answer

Recently, Europeans began trying to get used to drinking tea instead of daily coffees etc. The rest of the sentence is unclear as to exact meaning. The second sentence is grammatical, but the order makes it very difficult to read.

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  • Recently, Europeans began trying to get used to drinking tea instead of daily coffees etc.
  • The rest of the sentence is unclear as to exact meaning.
  • The second sentence is grammatical, but the order makes it very difficult to read.
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Recently, Europeans began trying to get used to drinking tea instead of daily coffees etc.

The rest of the sentence is unclear as to exact meaning.

The second sentence is grammatical, but the order makes it very difficult to read.
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