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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
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and please suggest me another better ways to write the sentences below if there are.

great thanks in advance

Jolin Tsai, a very famous singer, published an album of Dancing Diva, performs pommel Horse in her world concert.

The woman, promoted to master of disciplinary department in the last two years, was nicknamed “Speaker”.
  

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Hi, Could anybody answer me? Are both of them right? and please suggest me another better ways to write the sentences below if there are.

  • Hi, Could anybody answer me?
  • Are both of them right?
  • and please suggest me another better ways to write the sentences below if there are.
  • great thanks in advance Jolin Tsai, a very famous singer, published an album of Dancing Diva, performs pommel Horse Is she a singer or a gymnast?
  • in her world concert.
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Hi,

Could anybody answer me?

Are both of them right?

and please suggest me another better ways to write the sentences below if there are.

great thanks in advance



Jolin Tsai, a very famous singer, published an album of Dancing Diva, performs pommel Horse Is she a singer or a gymnast? in her world concert.



The woman, promote

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