Could anybody answer me?<br/><br/>Are both of them right?<br/><br/>and please suggest me another better ways to write the sentences below if there are.<br/><br/>great thanks in advance<br/><br/>Jolin Tsai, a very famous singer, published an album of Dancing Diva, performs pommel Horse in her world concert.<br/><br/>The woman, promoted to master of disciplinary department in the last two years, was nicknamed “Speaker”.