Are these sentences correct
1. The major concern is that people who need to get benefited from this move won’t be able to take the benefit because of the high train fares.
2. The major concern is that people who need to get benefited won’t be able to take the benefit because of the high train fares.
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anonymous The major concern is that people who need to get benefited could benefit from this move won’t be able to take the benefit because of the high train fares. As shown. "from this move" is very vague.
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anonymousThe major concern is that people whoneed to get benefitedcould benefitfrom this movewon’t be able totake the benefitbecause of the high train fares.
As shown.
"from this move" is very vague. Say what it is or leave it out completely.
CJ