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Too finicky 7 Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Sentences and Punctuations.

Sentences Review.

1. The driver, who was a government appointed officer, while on the way back from the garage was driving his car recklessly and due to his negligence, he hit a deer on the road.

2. Jordan is walking down a road.

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Jordan is walking on a road.

  

Top answer

The first sentence is inelegant. Find a way to make it simpler. EIther sentence in the second point is possible.

  • The first sentence is inelegant.
  • Find a way to make it simpler.
  • EIther sentence in the second point is possible.
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The first sentence is inelegant. Find a way to make it simpler.

EIther sentence in the second point is possible.

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