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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Sentences and grammar check Pls!
I try to express my piece of feeling in Eng as follow. I think this is a good way to learn Eng. Could anyone check and correct my sentences below? Thank you!
"Love is fragile in some way. It seems that no matter how many years you've been with him, what promises he have been made for you, and how many up and down you've been passed through with him... He still choose to be disloyal to you and cruelly break up the marriage! Now, they've finally decided to divorce and he will move out of the house on the 15th. Tear and pain has been fog fully in this March. Mary has once been intended to hurt herself by knife. We all just got to be very shock and frightened. God blessed that she now has calmed down a lot. She has already been scheduled all of her time to have fun with us together since the first day he move out of the house till the end of the holiday. It might be a kind of escape, but as long as this could make her feeling better, we certainly, are more than wiling to be her company. Through time, hope everything would be turn out fine."
"Love is fragile in some way. It seems that no matter how many years you've been with him, what promises he have been made for you, and how many up and down you've been passed through with him... He still choose to be disloyal to you and cruelly break up the marriage! Now, they've finally decided to divorce and he will move out of the house on the 15th. Tear and pain has been fog fully in this March. Mary has once been intended to hurt herself by knife. We all just got to be very shock and frightened. God blessed that she now has calmed down a lot. She has already been scheduled all of her time to have fun with us together since the first day he move out of the house till the end of the holiday. It might be a kind of escape, but as long as this could make her feeling better, we certainly, are more than wiling to be her company. Through time, hope everything would be turn out fine."
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Love is fragile in some way . It seems that no matter how many years you've been with him, what promises he has made to you , and how many ups and downs you've been passed through with him, he still chooses to be disloyal to you and cruelly break up the marriage! Now, they've [confusing switch from "you" to "they"] finally decided to divorce and he will move out of the house on the 15th.
- Love is fragile in some way .
- It seems that no matter how many years you've been with him, what promises he has made to you , and how many ups and downs you've been passed through with him, he still chooses to be disloyal to you and cruelly break up the marriage!
- Now, they've [confusing switch from "you" to "they"] finally decided to divorce and he will move out of the house on the 15th.
- Tears and pain have been fog fully ["fog fully" doesn't make any sense; don't know what you're trying to say] in this March.
- Mary once tried/threatened to harm herself with a knife; we were all very shocked and frightened.
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Love is fragile in some way. It seems that no matter how many years you've been with him, what promises he has made to you, and how many ups and downs you've been passed through with him, he still chooses to be disloyal to you and cruelly break up the marriage! Now, they've [confusing switch from "you" to "they"] finally decided to divorce and h
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