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CHAYAN PANCHORI Posted 6 years ago
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He was struggling with his career. He was a laboreous student of the class. He was doing everything needed to pass the compitition exam, but always failed. One day, he decided to give up and attempted the suicide. It was a very coward act in my opinion. We should try as much as possible and if we fail to do so then we must move on instead of ending our life..


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Other than misspelling, I'll not say there are mistakes but I would change some words according to what I see. He was struggling with his career. He was a hard-working student who's doing everything needed to pass the exam, but he always failed.

  • Other than misspelling, I'll not say there are mistakes but I would change some words according to what I see.
  • He was struggling with his career.
  • He was a hard-working student who's doing everything needed to pass the exam, but he always failed.
  • One day, he decided to give up and attempt suicide.
  • It was a very coward decision in my opinion.
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Other than misspelling, I'll not say there are mistakes but I would change some words according to what I see.

He was struggling with his career. He was a hard-working student who's doing everything needed to pass the exam, but he always failed. One day, he decided to give up and attempt suicide. It was a very coward decision in my opinion. We should t

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