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Ty123 Posted 8 years ago
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Is this OK: Being with you makes me feel like I’m in a classic romantic movie, you’re the heroine and I’m the hero. I never want this feeling to stop.
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Your sentence has a comma splice error. g: Being with you makes me feel like I’m in a classic romantic movie. You’re the heroine and I’m the hero.
- Your sentence has a comma splice error.
- g: Being with you makes me feel like I’m in a classic romantic movie.
- You’re the heroine and I’m the hero.
- I never want this feeling to stop.
- Being with you makes me feel like I’m in a classic romantic movie; you are the heroine and I'm the hero.
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Your sentence has a comma splice error.
You can fix the problem in several ways, e.g:
Being with you makes me feel like I’m in a classic romantic movie. You’re the heroine and I’m the hero. I never want this feeling to stop.
Being with you makes me feel like I’m in a classic romantic movie; you are the heroine and I'm the hero. I never want this feeling to stop.
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