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Ty123 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

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Is this OK: One of my favorite movies of all times. It's the story of two teenagers battling cancer and they end up falling in love with each other.
  

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" - That is technically not a sentence, as I guess you know. I do not have a problem with it, though, if it starts a review of the movie or something like that, except that it's "of all time" in this context, not "times". " - The "and" is very loose.

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  • " - That is technically not a sentence, as I guess you know.
  • I do not have a problem with it, though, if it starts a review of the movie or something like that, except that it's "of all time" in this context, not "times".
  • " - The "and" is very loose.
  • Better is "It's the story of two teenagers battling cancer who end up falling in love with each other"
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"One of my favorite movies of all times." - That is technically not a sentence, as I guess you know. I do not have a problem with it, though, if it starts a review of the movie or something like that, except that it's "of all time" in this context, not "times".

"It's the story of two teenagers battling cancer and they end up falling in love with each other." - The "and" is very loose. Be

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It's grammatically OK, but as written the two sentences "It's the story of two teenagers battling cancer" and "they end up falling in love with each other" seem to be separate thoughts which should be different sentences.

Better to replace "and they" with "who", and then it is one complete thought, with the second part being a subordinate clause of the first: "It's the story of two teena

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