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Alex722 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Sentences

Hello.

Can you tell please me which sentence is better?

In order to realize these participations, our company is requesting the administration for allocation of a fund (financial support).

Our Company is requesting the Administration to allocate a fund to enable our participation in meetings open for us.

Thank you

  

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Neither sounds good. Can you rewrite them in plain English? "

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Neither sounds good. Can you rewrite them in plain English? What do you mean by "the administration" and "open for us?"

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