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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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1# He saw men who were all in fire and walking up and down the streets.

2# he saw a thunderstorm dropping fire.

3# he saw the earth shaking and swaying as if there were a war in Heaven of fighting gods in the earth.


Are there any grammatical mistakes?

  

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anonymous #1 He saw men who were all in fire and walking up and down the streets. ['and' is not necessary. ] #2 H e saw a thunderstorm dropping fire.

— CalifJim

  • anonymous #1 He saw men who were all in fire and walking up and down the streets.
  • ['and' is not necessary.
  • ] #2 H e saw a thunderstorm dropping fire.
  • #3 H e saw the earth shaking and swaying as if there were a war in Heaven of fighting gods in the earth .
  • The underlined part of #3 is hard to understand.
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anonymous#1 He saw men who were all in fire and walking up and down the streets. ['and' is not necessary. I recommend that you leave it out.]
#2 He saw a thunderstorm dropping fire.
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I'm sorry,

I mean "The earth was shaking as if there were a war in heaven or fighting gods on earth."

Is it correct?

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anonymous1# He saw men who were all in fire and walking up and down the streets.

On would make more sense than in.

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