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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Are these sentences correct? Appreciate if anyone could help me correct, thanks.

1. This series follows chef Ching-He Huang in her efforts to help restaurant owners improve their menus by offering her expertise in Asian cooking and updates each eatery's decor.

2. By tapping into her Asian heritage and culinary expertise, Chef Ching He-Huang hopes she can help restaurant owners improve their cooking and save them from financial ruin.
  

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1. This series follows chef Ching-He Huang in her efforts to help restaurant owners update their eaterys' decor and improve their menus by offering her expertise in Asian cooking and updates each eatery's decor. #2 is OK grammatically.

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  • This series follows chef Ching-He Huang in her efforts to help restaurant owners update their eaterys' decor and improve their menus by offering her expertise in Asian cooking and updates each eatery's decor.
  • #2 is OK grammatically.
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1. This series follows chef Ching-He Huang in her efforts to help restaurant owners update their eaterys' decor and improve their menus by offering her expertise in Asian cooking and updates each eatery's decor.

#2 is OK grammatically.
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Thank you so much for the response. Could you please confirm whether the” eaterys” should be eateries? Also, I have included the space between owners update. Is that correct? Please advise. Thanks.

This series follows chef Ching-He Huang in her efforts to help restaurant owners update their (eaterys' or eateries) decor and improve their menus by offering her expertise in Asian cooking.
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Anonymouse. Could you please confirm whether the” eaterys” should be eateries?
It could be eatery's or eateries', but the word does not seem very appropriate, as it is more often used to refer to a small, cheap restaurant. I also fail to see how expertise in cooking will aid in the improvement of restaurant decor.
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I replaced it the word to "restaurant" from eateries

This series follows chef Ching-He Huang in her efforts to help restaurant owners update their restaurant decor and improve their menus by offering her expertise in Asian cooking.
restaurant
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AnonymousI replaced it the word to "restaurant" from eateries
OK, but now you have 'restaurant' twice. You don't need that, since restaurateurs naturally have restaurants. And you still have not solved the puzzle of how cooking instruction can improve decor. I suggest that you simply delete the last phrase.

This series follows Asian chef Ching-He
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AnonymousCould you please confirm whether the” eaterys” should be eateries?
Right. It was late, and I was fiddling with the plural possessive.

An eatery in the US is a very casual, informal restaurant. An eatery does not serve haute cuisine, but "Blue Plate Specials."
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