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Kanou Posted 11 years ago
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Could you correct the following sentences?
- You always have to be respectful, tolerant and friendly.ou should also put effort in what you are doing.
- He shouldn't benefit some only some employees, because that would rise rivality.
- They have a bufget for it and they have to spend it.
- You always have to be respectful, tolerant and friendly.ou should also put effort in what you are doing.
- He shouldn't benefit some only some employees, because that would rise rivality.
- They have a bufget for it and they have to spend it.
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Kanou You always have to be respectful, tolerant , and friendly . Y ou should also put effort into what you are doing. As shown above.
- Kanou You always have to be respectful, tolerant , and friendly .
- Y ou should also put effort into what you are doing.
- As shown above.
- Kanou He shouldn't benefit some only some employees, because that would rise rivality.
- increase rivalry .
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KanouYou always have to be respectful, tolerant, and friendly. You should also put effort into what you are doing.As shown above.
KanouHe shouldn't benefitsomeonly some employees, because that wouldrise
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The first is fine, except for the typo of the missing "Y" in "you."
"Benefit" means to receive something positive, so it can't be used in the transitive manner you have here. "Rise" is intransitive. "Raise" is a possible substitute. The world for there being rivals, is "rivalry." So: "He shouldn't favor some employees over others because that would raise rivalry."
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"Benefit" means to receive something positive, so it can't be used in the transitive manner you have here. "Rise" is intransitive. "Raise" is a possible substitute. The world for there being rivals, is "rivalry." So: "He shouldn't favor some employees over others because that would raise rivalry."
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Thank you for the explanation and correction! I have the feeling that the more I study the less I know. 
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As with any complex field of study, you start by learning how much there is to know. It can be daunting today to learn that there's more to learn than you thought there was yesterday. But do not despair. Fluency comes from practice in listening to and reading the works of native speakers. I went back and looked at some of your previous posts, particularly your essay on funding of facilities.
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I know but...it's the first language I am trying to study with so much effort. I was just lucky to be born into a Spanish-German family.
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