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Kanou Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Sentences

Could you please correct the following sentences?

He is such an uptight person. He didin’t want to sit with us on the grassbecause he was afraid of staining his pants.

She is a very thoughtful person. She gave me her jacket when she realized that I was cold.

When he looked at me I shivered with fear. His grimace was repugnant.

The paintings which were drawn by children showed more exuberance.

He was looked at with quirk since he wasn’t expected to be alive.

She was donning a red dress which emphasised her green eyes.
  

Top answer

Uptight person. Fine. Thoughtful person.

  • Uptight person.
  • Fine.
  • Thoughtful person.
  • Fine.
  • Repugnant.
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Uptight person. Fine.
Thoughtful person. Fine.

Repugnant. Comma after "me," and before "I." It's a little odd, as the person with the grimace sounds like the one repelled, but grammatically, fine.

Paintings. Are the children incidental or defining? If the former, in AmE, you would say "The paintings, which were drawn by children, ...." if the latter, "The paintings that
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KanouShe was donning a red dress which emphasised her green eyes.
Be sure you do not mean "wearing a red dress".
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deadratRepugnant. Comma after "me," and before "I." It's a little odd, as the person with the grimace sounds like the one repelled, but grammatically, fine.
Oh! I get what you mean. Thank you!
deadratPaintings. Are the children incidental or defining? If the former, in AmE, you would say "The paintings, which were drawn by children, ...
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GPYBe sure you do not mean "wearing a red dress".
I've looked it up and the dictionary said that it meant "put on an item of clothing" Maybe I don't get 100% the difference between donning and wearing :/ So is donning the action of dressing yourself and wearing when you are already dressed?
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KanouSo is donning the action of dressing yourself and wearing when you are already dressed?
Yes.
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Anders never allowed the vegetables to touch the meat on his plate. It was one his many little but annoying quirks.
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deadratAnders never allowed the vegetables to touch the meat on his plate. It was one his many little but annoying quirks
Thank you so much for the example!

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