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Kanou Posted 11 years ago
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Could you correct the following sentences?

The education system doesn't provide the link between student's skills and the interest they have in their future jobs.

There is a mismatch between what employers need with what the education system gives to them as future skilled workers.

They could join this iniciative giving more opportunities to do an internship in their companies.

We should implement improvements in the educational system which changes the situation and makes the tendency change to the place we need: students prepared to face to the real environment in which they'll be involved in their close future.

Thank you for helping me out =)
  

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The education system doesn't provide the link between student 's skills talents and the careers they're interesting in pursuing interest they have in their future jobs . There is a mismatch between what the skills employers need and with what the education system is providing them with gives to them as future skilled workers . I couldn't figure out the meaning of the last two sentences!

  • The education system doesn't provide the link between student 's skills talents and the careers they're interesting in pursuing interest they have in their future jobs .
  • There is a mismatch between what the skills employers need and with what the education system is providing them with gives to them as future skilled workers .
  • I couldn't figure out the meaning of the last two sentences!
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The education system doesn't provide the link between student's skills talents and the careers they're interesting in pursuing interest they have in their future jobs.

There is a mismatch between what the skills employers need and with what the education system is providing them with gives to them as futur
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teechrThe education system doesn't provide the link between student's skills talents and the careers they're interesting in pursuing interest they have in their future jobs.There is a mismatch between what the skills employers need and with what the education system is providing them with gives to them as future skilled workers.
Thank you teechr!

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I hope this helps:
The education system should be changed to incorporate a work experience component for students about to graduate, in order to give them a better chance of success in the real workplace.
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Of course it helps! I would give you 100 likes if I could!

Thank you!
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teechrstudent's skills talents and the careers they're interesting in pursuing
You probably meant to say 'students' talents and the careers they're interested in pursuing'.
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IvanhrYou probably meant to say 'students' talents and the careers they're interested in pursuing'.
I did indeed. Thanks Ivanhr.

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