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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Can you check my sentences, please?

-Before my studies at university I worked and volunteered for a kindergarten for 3 years. I have also volunteered for different kids organizations where I have run creative workshops for children aged 4-11 and have been a staff member of many kids summer camps for 8 years.

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Before university, I volunteered at a kindergarten for 3 years. I have also volunteered for other children's organizations, where I ran creative workshops for ages 4-11, and I was a staff member of several children's summer camps for 8 years.

  • Before university, I volunteered at a kindergarten for 3 years.
  • I have also volunteered for other children's organizations, where I ran creative workshops for ages 4-11, and I was a staff member of several children's summer camps for 8 years.
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Before university, I volunteered at a kindergarten for 3 years. I have also volunteered for other children's organizations, where I ran creative workshops for ages 4-11, and I was a staff member of several children's summer camps for 8 years.

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