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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Sentences

Which is acceptable, (1) or (2) ? If not, please check them.

(1) We always insist diversified service.
(2) We adhere to and offer the pluralistic service from start to finish.
  

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(1) We always insist on diversified service. (2) We adhere to and offer diversified service from start to finish. The trouble is, I don't know what you think 'diversified service' means.

— Mister Micawber

  • (1) We always insist on diversified service.
  • (2) We adhere to and offer diversified service from start to finish.
  • The trouble is, I don't know what you think 'diversified service' means.
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(1) We always insist on diversified service.
(2) We adhere to and offer diversified service from start to finish.

The trouble is, I don't know what you think 'diversified service' means.
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Both of the sentences originally mean that our service include a wide variety of items and we will do everything to satisfy our customers. I just don't know how to express this idea in a natural way.
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OK, then I think this is what you want:

We offer diversified services from start to finish.
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Another teacher revised the sentence as written. Is it a better effort?

We provide a wide variety of services and we try to do everything possible to help our customers.
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Better than mine? Of course not! But that is fine, too. It is more informal.
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