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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
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Are the following sentence acceptable? Are they coherent?
(1) Some time ago, while I was roaming through the immense space, I discovered a globe, the Earth, which is as clear as crystal.
(2) It received a lot of my attention.
(3) I watched it, fascinated.
(4) I couldn't resist its temptation, so I berthed my space ship here.
(1) Some time ago, while I was roaming through the immense space, I discovered a globe, the Earth, which is as clear as crystal.
(2) It received a lot of my attention.
(3) I watched it, fascinated.
(4) I couldn't resist its temptation, so I berthed my space ship here.
Top answer
(1) Some time ago, while I was roaming through space , I discovered a planet, Earth , which is as clear as crystal. (2) X (3) I watched it, fascinated. (4) I couldn't resist its allure , so I landed my space ship there .
- (1) Some time ago, while I was roaming through space , I discovered a planet, Earth , which is as clear as crystal.
- (2) X (3) I watched it, fascinated.
- (4) I couldn't resist its allure , so I landed my space ship there .
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(1) Some time ago, while I was roaming through space, I discovered a planet, Earth, which is as clear as crystal.
(2) X
(3) I watched it, fascinated.
(4) I couldn't resist its allure, so I landed my space ship there.
(2) X
(3) I watched it, fascinated.
(4) I couldn't resist its allure, so I landed my space ship there.
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