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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Sentences

Which sentence is preferable ?

1. However, Tina was not conscious of being traced by the cat's companions all the way.

2. However, Tina didn't know that the cat's companions traced them along the way.
  

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contiluo 1. However, Tina was not conscious of being traced by the cat's companions all the way. 2.

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  • contiluo 1.
  • However, Tina was not conscious of being traced by the cat's companions all the way.
  • 2.
  • However, Tina didn't know that the cat's companions traced them along the way.
  • Who m does "them" refer to?
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contiluo1. However, Tina was not conscious of being traced by the cat's companions all the way.
2. However, Tina didn't know that the cat's companions traced them along the way.
Whom does "them" refer to?

I prefer the first sentence, if you borrow "along" from the second. "All the way" seems awkward here.
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In senetnce 2, "them" refers to Tina and the cat she took.
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contiluoIn senetnce 2, "them" refers to Tina and the cat she took.
Got it! Thanks.

You could say, " . . . all along the way." That would be fine.
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