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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
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Are the following sentences acceptable?
1. On her way to the park, Tina saw a cat roaming on the streetside. It was so cute that she couldn't resist the temptation to tease the cat.
2. Later, Tina thought it might be a stray cat.
3. Prompted by compassion, Tina took the cat home.
1. On her way to the park, Tina saw a cat roaming on the streetside. It was so cute that she couldn't resist the temptation to tease the cat.
2. Later, Tina thought it might be a stray cat.
3. Prompted by compassion, Tina took the cat home.
Top answer
Are the following sentences acceptable? I suggest only one change. 1.
- Are the following sentences acceptable?
- I suggest only one change.
- 1.
- On her way to the park, Tina saw a cat roaming on the street streetside .
- ") It was so cute that she couldn't resist the temptation to tease the cat ( I would repeat the pronoun "it," but "the cat" is OK .
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Are the following sentences acceptable?
I suggest only one change.
1. On her way to the park, Tina saw a cat roaming on the streetstreetside. (A more natural expression is "Tina saw a cat roaming the streets.")
It was so cute that she couldn't resist the temptation to tease the cat ( I would repeat the pronoun "it," but "the cat" is OK. )
I suggest only one change.
1. On her way to the park, Tina saw a cat roaming on the street
It was so cute that she couldn't resist the temptation to tease the cat ( I would repeat the pronoun "it," but "the cat" is OK. )
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