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0With a bag of pretzels in my hand and a mouthful of it, I sit in font of the computer checking emails. In the background is the TV playing a documentary on snakes. In two hours, I'll be leaving home to pick up my girlfriend from work and in five days, I'll be flying to one of the megacities in the world, NewYork. I'm kind of excited as my last visit to New York was in a summer five year ago and it was a short stay. My friend in NY has agreed to show me around the city, in his brand new fancy mercedes. Just can't wait. 02br
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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas (you have a lot of trouble with commas-- please research them on the internet):02i 02br 02br 00With a bag of pretzels in my hand and a mouthful of 01u 00it02u 00, I sit in 01u 00font02u 00 of the computer checking emails. In the background is the TV 01u 00playing02u 00 a documentary on snakes. In two hours, I'll be leaving home to pick up my girlfriend from 01u 00work and02u 00 in five days, I'll be flying to one of the 01b 00world's 02b 00megacities, New York.

— Mister Micawber

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas (you have a lot of trouble with commas-- please research them on the internet):02i 02br 02br 00With a bag of pretzels in my hand and a mouthful of 01u 00it02u 00, I sit in 01u 00font02u 00 of the computer checking emails.
  • In the background is the TV 01u 00playing02u 00 a documentary on snakes.
  • In two hours, I'll be leaving home to pick up my girlfriend from 01u 00work and02u 00 in five days, I'll be flying to one of the 01b 00world's 02b 00megacities, New York.
  • I'm kind of01u 00 excited as02u 00 my last visit to New York was01u 00 in02u 00 a summer five 01u 00year02u 00 ago and it was a short stay.
  • My friend in NY has agreed to show me around the 01u 00city, in02u 00 his brand new fancy 01u 00mercedes02u 00.
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