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Newguest Posted 18 years ago
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00I'm writing, actually I'm trying to translate, a certain text and from time to time I have some troubles with some sentences. Will you be so kind to have a look at the sentences below and point out the mistakes, or suggest some better ways of writing them. Thank you.02br
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001. In VI-VII centuries after Christ the Germans started to flock in these lands. IS IT ALL RIGHT TO WRITE "IN VI-VII CENTURIES" HOW ABOUT "FLOCK"02br
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002. ......was captured by Hungarians OR MAYBE: THE HUNGARIANS02br
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003. In XI century OR: IN THE ELEVENTH CENTURY02br
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004.Over 38% of the population professed no religion.02br
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005.During the First World War Slovenians remained loyal towards the Habsburgs. SLOVENIANS/THE SLOVENIANS02br
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006.Serbs were the biggest minority who formed 2.0% of the population. MAYBE: THE SERBS02br
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007. In July, 2007 Slovenia was inhabited by 2,009,245 people of various age groups in a population:......... HOW ABOUT THE NUMBER. THERE SHOULD BE COMMAS OR PERIODS?02br
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008.The average lifespan was about 76-56 years, including men – 72-84 years, and women – 80-47 years. 02br
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009. Pursuant to the Constitution of 2000 the head of state is a president, and the government is managed by the prime minister.02br
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0010. The basic pension was calculated on the basis of the avarage net remuneration from 10 best years of employment. IS IT ALL RIGHT TO WRITE: "FROM 10 BEST YEARS OF EMPLOYMENT"?02br
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00I'm actually half way through the article, so maybe I'll post some more sentences soon. If anyone finds some time,please have a look at them.02br
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12br 12br 10I'm writing, actually I'm trying to translate, a certain text and from time to time I have some troubles with some sentences. Will you be so kind to have a look at the sentences below and point out the mistakes, or suggest some better ways of writing them. 12br 12br 101.

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  • 12br 12br 10I'm writing, actually I'm trying to translate, a certain text and from time to time I have some troubles with some sentences.
  • Will you be so kind to have a look at the sentences below and point out the mistakes, or suggest some better ways of writing them.
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  • In VI-VII centuries after Christ the Germans started to flock in these lands.
  • 12font 12b 10 HOW ABOUT "FLOCK" 11b 10"flock into" is ok12b 12br 12br 102.
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01cite10Newguest12cite10Hi guys.12br
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0Hi Feebs. Thanks for answering.02br
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00In IX century these principalities were subordinated to the Eastern March, and in X century Carniola was captured by Hungarians. ACCORDING TO YOUR TIPS IT SHOULD BE: In the ninth/In the 9th century......and in the tenth/10th century.......was capture
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01cite10Newguest12cite10Hi Feebs. Thanks for answering.12br
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10In IX century these principalities were subordinated to the Eastern March, and in X century Carniola was captured by Hungarians. ACCORDING TO YOUR TIPS IT SHOULD BE: In the ninth/In the 9th cent
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