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Tung Quoc Posted 20 years ago
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Please correct the mistakes in these sentences:

When you call me at my mobile and if no one answers, that's because I'm at the groundfloor while my mobile is in my room. In this case, please either send me a message or call my home phone or write me an email or don't do anything, I'll call back to you. Besides, as soon as I receive it, I'll fill it out and send it back to you.

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Please correct the mistakes in these sentences: When you call me on my mobile and (if ) no one answers, that's because I'm ( on the groundfloor) DOWNSTAIRS (while) and my mobile is in my room. In this case, please (either) send me a message , (or) call (my home phone) me at home, (or) write me an e - mail , or don't do anything : I'll call you back . (Besides,) As soon as I receive it (WHAT?

— Inchoateknowledge

  • Please correct the mistakes in these sentences: When you call me on my mobile and (if ) no one answers, that's because I'm ( on the groundfloor) DOWNSTAIRS (while) and my mobile is in my room.
  • In this case, please (either) send me a message , (or) call (my home phone) me at home, (or) write me an e - mail , or don't do anything : I'll call you back .
  • (Besides,) As soon as I receive it (WHAT?
  • ), I'll fill it out??
  • and send it back to you.
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Please correct the mistakes in these sentences:

When you call me on my mobile and (if ) no one answers, that's because I'm (on the groundfloor) DOWNSTAIRS (while) and my mobile is in my room. In this case, please (either) send me a message, (or) call (my home phone) me at home, (or) write me
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Leaving aside the mystery of what it is that will be filled out, the only mistake that stands out to me is I'll call back to you. This has to be changed to I'll call you back. InchoK has noted other points as well.

CJ
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