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Fizzi Posted 20 years ago
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Medicines information is an important pillar of newly developed Malaysian medicines policy which is still not fully implemented. A study on the quality of information in pharmaceutical advertisements in medical journal in Malaysia would provide important information for monitoring the progress of the Malaysian medicines policy as regards of medicines information.

Regards,
Dean
  

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Hi, Medicines information is an important pillar of newly developed Malaysian medicines policy which is still not fully implemented. A study on the quality of information in pharmaceutical advertisements in medical journal in Malaysia would provide important information for monitoring the progress of the Malaysian medicines policy as regards of medicines information. Medicines information is an important pillar of a newly developed Malaysian medicines policy which is still not fully implemented.

  • Hi, Medicines information is an important pillar of newly developed Malaysian medicines policy which is still not fully implemented.
  • A study on the quality of information in pharmaceutical advertisements in medical journal in Malaysia would provide important information for monitoring the progress of the Malaysian medicines policy as regards of medicines information.
  • Medicines information is an important pillar of a newly developed Malaysian medicines policy which is still not fully implemented.
  • A study on the quality of information in pharmaceutical advertisements in medical journals in Malaysia would provide important information for monitoring the progress of the Malaysian medicines policy.
  • The phrase 'medicines information' ( and 'medicines policy') is rather awkward.
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Hi,

Medicines information is an important pillar of newly developed Malaysian medicines policy which is still not fully implemented. A study on the quality of information in pharmaceutical advertisements in medical journal in Malaysia would provide important information for monitoring the
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Thanks Clive for your comments.

Regards,

Dean

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