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Kk Posted 21 years ago
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001.Taking a part-time job makes it difficult for young students to enter a prestigious. 02br
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002.An academic survey about whether teenagers holding a part-time job degrade their academic performances revealed that a part-time really hurt the education of young students’grades. 02br
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003. The contributions of padauk have been engraved in people's mind in my country. 0-
  

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0 Hello KK 02br 02br 00I'm a learner myself and so I am afraid I am not qualified to correct your sentences. But let me try it. Having a part-time job makes young students difficult to enter a prestigious school.

— Paco2004

  • 0 Hello KK 02br 02br 00I'm a learner myself and so I am afraid I am not qualified to correct your sentences.
  • But let me try it.
  • Having a part-time job makes young students difficult to enter a prestigious school.
  • An academic research on the influence of teenagers' part time jobs revealed that the jobs really affect/affected their academic performances.
  • 02br 003.
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0 Hello KK 02br
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00I'm a learner myself and so I am afraid I am not qualified to correct your sentences. But let me try it. 02br
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001.Having a part-time job makes young students difficult to enter a prestigious school. 02br
002.An academic research on the influence of teenagers' part time jobs revealed that the jobs really affect/affec
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01.Taking a part-time job makes it difficult for young students to enter a prestigious SCHOOL. 02br
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002.An academic survey of whether part-time jobs degrade a teenagers' academic performance revealed that working adversely affects their education. 02br
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003. The contribution of padauk to my country has been engraved in people's minds. 02br
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