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Kk Posted 21 years ago
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0 Hello, 02 br
00 I am not sure how to correct these sentences in term of grammar and semantics. 02 br
00 Can you give me a hand. 02 br
00 Thank you for your help. 02 br
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00 Speaking of the benefits of attending a live play includes experiencing an atmosphere at scene and enjoying a sense of immediacy. 02 br
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00 Which one is right? 02 br
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00 When going to a live concert, we can clearly see performers' body languages, facial expressions,gestures and sentiments, enabling us to appreciate their shows. 02 br
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00 When going to a live concert, we can clearly see performers' body languages, facial expressions,gestures and sentiments which enable us to appreciate their shows. 0-
00 I am not sure how to correct these sentences in term of grammar and semantics. 02 br
00 Can you give me a hand. 02 br
00 Thank you for your help. 02 br
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00 Speaking of the benefits of attending a live play includes experiencing an atmosphere at scene and enjoying a sense of immediacy. 02 br
02 br
00 Which one is right? 02 br
02 br
00 When going to a live concert, we can clearly see performers' body languages, facial expressions,gestures and sentiments, enabling us to appreciate their shows. 02 br
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00 When going to a live concert, we can clearly see performers' body languages, facial expressions,gestures and sentiments which enable us to appreciate their shows. 0-
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0 A modified form of the second would be better, I think. 02 br 02 br 00 When going to a live concert, we can clearly see 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 players' body languag 01 b 00 e, 02 b 00 facial expressions, gestures, and 01 b 00 feelings 02 b 00 , which enable us to appreciate their performance(s). 02 br 02 br 00 Or: ...
- 0 A modified form of the second would be better, I think.
- 02 br 02 br 00 When going to a live concert, we can clearly see 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 players' body languag 01 b 00 e, 02 b 00 facial expressions, gestures, and 01 b 00 feelings 02 b 00 , which enable us to appreciate their performance(s).
- 02 br 02 br 00 Or: ...
- performers' body language, ...
- their efforts.
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0 A modified form of the second would be better, I think. 02 br
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00 When going to a live concert, we can clearly see 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 players' body languag 01 b 00 e, 02 b 00 facial expressions, gestures, and 01 b 00 feelings 02 b 00 , which enable us to appreciate their performance(s). 02 br
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00 Or:
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00 When going to a live concert, we can clearly see 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 players' body languag 01 b 00 e, 02 b 00 facial expressions, gestures, and 01 b 00 feelings 02 b 00 , which enable us to appreciate their performance(s). 02 br
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00 Or:
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0 I would rephrase the sentences as follows: 02 br
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01 b 00 At a live concert, our clearly seeing the performers' body language, facial expressions, gestures, and sentiments enables us to appreciate their shows. 02 b 02 br
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00 It is not on the way to the concert, but at it that we can see the expressions, etc.. 02 br
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01 b 00 At a live concert, our clearly seeing the performers' body language, facial expressions, gestures, and sentiments enables us to appreciate their shows. 02 b 02 br
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00 It is not on the way to the concert, but at it that we can see the expressions, etc.. 02 br
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