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Kk Posted 21 years ago
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00I am not sure how to correct these sentences in term of grammar and semantics. 02br
00Can you give me a hand. 02br
00Thank you for your help. 02br
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00Speaking of the benefits of attending a live play includes experiencing an atmosphere at scene and enjoying a sense of immediacy. 02br
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00Which one is right? 02br
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00When going to a live concert, we can clearly see performers' body languages, facial expressions,gestures and sentiments, enabling us to appreciate their shows. 02br
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00When going to a live concert, we can clearly see performers' body languages, facial expressions,gestures and sentiments which enable us to appreciate their shows. 0-
  

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0 A modified form of the second would be better, I think. 02br 02br 00When going to a live concert, we can clearly see 01b 00the02b 00 players' body languag01b 00e,02b 00 facial expressions, gestures, and 01b 00feelings02b 00, which enable us to appreciate their performance(s). 02br 02br 00Or: ...

  • 0 A modified form of the second would be better, I think.
  • 02br 02br 00When going to a live concert, we can clearly see 01b 00the02b 00 players' body languag01b 00e,02b 00 facial expressions, gestures, and 01b 00feelings02b 00, which enable us to appreciate their performance(s).
  • 02br 02br 00Or: ...
  • performers' body language, ...
  • their efforts.
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0 A modified form of the second would be better, I think. 02br
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00When going to a live concert, we can clearly see 01b00the02b00 players' body languag01b00e,02b00 facial expressions, gestures, and 01b00feelings02b00, which enable us to appreciate their performance(s). 02br
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00Or:
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0 I would rephrase the sentences as follows: 02br
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01b00At a live concert, our clearly seeing the performers' body language, facial expressions, gestures, and sentiments enables us to appreciate their shows.02b02br
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00It is not on the way to the concert, but at it that we can see the expressions, etc.. 02br
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