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WANG CHUN Posted 21 years ago
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Hello
Thses sentences are my normal homework.
I am sure they still have a lot of room for imorovement
Can you give me hand with them.
I appreciste your help.
Whoever decides to move to a new country, they had better overcome cultural shock and adapt to it.
She is incorporated into the American society without any resistance. Or She incorporates into the American society. Which one is correct?
Some immigrants will be discriminated against by people living in this country for a long time.
If the cultural identify of the whole country continues it won’t be united.
Thses sentences are my normal homework.
I am sure they still have a lot of room for imorovement
Can you give me hand with them.
I appreciste your help.
Whoever decides to move to a new country, they had better overcome cultural shock and adapt to it.
She is incorporated into the American society without any resistance. Or She incorporates into the American society. Which one is correct?
Some immigrants will be discriminated against by people living in this country for a long time.
If the cultural identify of the whole country continues it won’t be united.
Top answer
Sentence one. Drop the comma and the word 'they' and the 'to it'. Sentence 2/3.
- Sentence one.
- Drop the comma and the word 'they' and the 'to it'.
- Sentence 2/3.
- I'm not too sure of your intended meaning here.
- When you say resistance do you mean resistance from the existing population, or problems on her behalf.
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Sentence one. Drop the comma and the word 'they' and the 'to it'.
Sentence 2/3. I'm not too sure of your intended meaning here. When you say resistance do you mean resistance from the existing population, or problems on her behalf. Who is 'she' anyway? If you are still talking about any hypothetical person, you can't use a gender spedific pronoun.
Sentence 4. Ok but a li
Sentence 2/3. I'm not too sure of your intended meaning here. When you say resistance do you mean resistance from the existing population, or problems on her behalf. Who is 'she' anyway? If you are still talking about any hypothetical person, you can't use a gender spedific pronoun.
Sentence 4. Ok but a li
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