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Jobb Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Sentences
Are these sentences okay?
1 This price will be subject to our final confirmation.
2 To develop business, we will buy 80MT as a trial order.
3 The new arrival bikes will be delivered by vessel of "Dongfeng".
4 This first order will bring volume case in future.
5 L/C will be needed if amount is beyond this.
6 One copy of price list will be enclosed.
7 We think your machinery has reached international level.
1 This price will be subject to our final confirmation.
2 To develop business, we will buy 80MT as a trial order.
3 The new arrival bikes will be delivered by vessel of "Dongfeng".
4 This first order will bring volume case in future.
5 L/C will be needed if amount is beyond this.
6 One copy of price list will be enclosed.
7 We think your machinery has reached international level.
Top answer
Hello again Jobb Here are my suggestions. In some cases, I'm not quite sure of the meaning. I've marked these with an ***: 1 This price is subject to confirmation.
- Hello again Jobb Here are my suggestions.
- In some cases, I'm not quite sure of the meaning.
- I've marked these with an ***: 1 This price is subject to confirmation.
- 2 To encourage business, we will buy 80MT as a trial ***.
- 3 The consignment of new bikes will be sent on the "Dongfeng".
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Hello again Jobb
Here are my suggestions. In some cases, I'm not quite sure of the meaning. I've marked these with an ***:
1 This price is subject to confirmation.
2 To encourage business, we will buy 80MT as a trial ***.
3 The consignment of new bikes will be sent on the "Dongfeng".
4 This first order will bring volume case in ***.
Here are my suggestions. In some cases, I'm not quite sure of the meaning. I've marked these with an ***:
1 This price is subject to confirmation.
2 To encourage business, we will buy 80MT as a trial ***.
3 The consignment of new bikes will be sent on the "Dongfeng".
4 This first order will bring volume case in ***.
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I don't know why you could not understand some of them. Here is my explanation:
2 To encourage business, we will buy 80MT as a trial ***.
=>>> For the purpose of promoting business of both sieds, we'd like to buy 80 metric tons of your product(s). But this trade is just tentative. If succeeds, we will buy far more products from you.
2 To encourage business, we will buy 80MT as a trial ***.
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>>> For the purpose of promoting business of both sieds, we'd like to buy 80 metric tons of your product(s). But this trade is just tentative. If succeeds, we will buy far more products from you.
3 The c
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I'm sorry, Jobb, I'm easily confused.
Here are my further suggestions:
2. In that case, I would stay with 'To encourage business, we will buy 80MT as a trial order'. There may be a better/special piece of business English for this situation, but I can't think of it. Someone else may know.
3 Ah! I thought it was a shiop. Maybe:
'The consignment of new bike
Here are my further suggestions:
2. In that case, I would stay with 'To encourage business, we will buy 80MT as a trial order'. There may be a better/special piece of business English for this situation, but I can't think of it. Someone else may know.
3 Ah! I thought it was a shiop. Maybe:
'The consignment of new bike
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