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Apprentice123 Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Sentence/Paragraph Help

Is correct I have one paragraph that has only one sentence and this sentence starts with "But" ??

My sentence:
But one thing stilled in my mind: "I am going to the birthplace of soccer."
  

Top answer

I don't recommend it as a general style. However, it could be effective in certain creative writing.

— Philip

  • I don't recommend it as a general style.
  • However, it could be effective in certain creative writing.
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I don't recommend it as a general style.

However, it could be effective in certain creative writing.
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PhilipI don't recommend it as a general style.However, it could be effective in certain creative writing.
Yes. English is my second language, and that situation makes me confused. How about my sentence. Is correct?

Thanks
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I don't understand what you mean by 'stilled'. It seems wrong to me.

Clive
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CliveI don't understand what you mean by 'stilled'. It seems wrong to me.Clive
I mean that still on my mind
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Then say

But one thing is still on my mind: "I am going to the birthplace of soccer."
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CliveThen sayBut one thing is still on my mind: "I am going to the birthplace of soccer."
Okay. But I am talking about something that happened in the past.
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Then say was instead of is.
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