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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Sentence wording

Is this sentence worded in the correct way, particularly the middle part?Lord Rykard Gonzakan revealed that after Ackal V’s execution of Meeka and the other blameless commanders for failing to stop Tol earlier, the warlords of the Great Horde had come to a momentous decision.
  

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It's okay.

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Okay thanks so much for all your advice and help!

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