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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence worded in the best way? FYI- Tylocost is the elf.
Tol informed Tylocost that the elf was no longer his prisoner and could go free after the completion of his mission.
Tol informed Tylocost that the elf was no longer his prisoner and could go free after the completion of his mission.
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I do not see any grammatical nor lexical mistake in your text, but it is not clear to me whom each "his" refers to in that context. You need to clarify that, otherwise it is ambiguous as it stands. Hamid
- I do not see any grammatical nor lexical mistake in your text, but it is not clear to me whom each "his" refers to in that context.
- You need to clarify that, otherwise it is ambiguous as it stands.
- Hamid
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I do not see any grammatical nor lexical mistake in your text, but it is not clear to me whom each "his" refers to in that context. You need to clarify that, otherwise it is ambiguous as it stands.
Hamid
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Okay thanks a lot. Is this revision make it clear that the 'he' refers to Tylocost? FYI- Tol is the warlord.
Tylocost was informed by Tol that he was no longer the warlord's prisoner and could go free after the completion of his mission.
Tylocost was informed by Tol that he was no longer the warlord's prisoner and could go free after the completion of his mission.
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