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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Sentence wording
Is the second part of this sentence worded in the correct way?
The emperor discussed battle plans for the upcoming campaign against the bakali with his warlords, and ordered a huge amount of food and arms from the imperial stores for the hordes.
The emperor discussed battle plans for the upcoming campaign against the bakali with his warlords, and ordered a huge amount of food and arms from the imperial stores for the hordes.
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With the comma, you need to repeat the subject. I would make the second a separate sentence with also .
- With the comma, you need to repeat the subject.
- I would make the second a separate sentence with also .
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With the comma, you need to repeat the subject. I would make the second a separate sentence with also.
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Thanks a lot for your help. If you get a chance could you please check out my other unanswered question.
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