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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Sentence wording

Is this sentence worded in the correct way, particularly the end?
In an attempt to save his life and those of his comrades, Tol announced to the assembled corsairs his true identity as Lord Tolandruth
  

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That seems perfectly OK to me. Tol and his comrades were confronted by a group of corsairs who did not know who he was. He announced his true identity, as a Lord, hoping that would save himself and his friends Your sentence says it clearly Dave

— Dave_anon

  • That seems perfectly OK to me.
  • Tol and his comrades were confronted by a group of corsairs who did not know who he was.
  • He announced his true identity, as a Lord, hoping that would save himself and his friends Your sentence says it clearly Dave
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That seems perfectly OK to me. Tol and his comrades were confronted by a group of corsairs who did not know who he was. He announced his true identity, as a Lord, hoping that would save himself and his friends

Your sentence says it clearly

Dave
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Thanks for your help.
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