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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence worded in the correct way, particularly the use of 'there'?
Porthios journeyed with his father to the second meeting of the Whitestone Council in 352 AC, and there demanded the return of the dragon orb that had been taken from the Qualinesti settlement in Southern Ergoth.
Porthios journeyed with his father to the second meeting of the Whitestone Council in 352 AC, and there demanded the return of the dragon orb that had been taken from the Qualinesti settlement in Southern Ergoth.
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It's fine. Technically, you need to add he because of the comma: and there he demanded..
- It's fine.
- Technically, you need to add he because of the comma: and there he demanded..
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It's fine. Technically, you need to add he because of the comma: and there he demanded..
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