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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence properly worded? FYI- Valindra is one of the Thayans.
Before the Thayans moved to engage Bruenor's group and to protect themselves from the dwarf ghosts, Valindra used a magical scepter to summon the pit fiend Beealtimatuche from the Nine Hells to serve her will.
Before the Thayans moved to engage Bruenor's group and to protect themselves from the dwarf ghosts, Valindra used a magical scepter to summon the pit fiend Beealtimatuche from the Nine Hells to serve her will.
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It is alright. To serve her will might sound better as part of another sentence because the last noun referred to was the fiend, not Valindra.
- It is alright.
- To serve her will might sound better as part of another sentence because the last noun referred to was the fiend, not Valindra.
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It is alright. To serve her will might sound better as part of another sentence because the last noun referred to was the fiend, not Valindra.
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